Black Poetry : for joy (revised)

...>floats in>

Man, the words strike deep as the sea here, and reveals all the dark secrets that has lain hidden in the abyss of low self worth and esteem based on what others have deemed us to be or not to be, based on the established norm. I remember this piece well, because of the compassion and feeling it conveys. The revision is just as compassionate, and flows forth like a river breaking through a dam that has long held it at bay.

I love the entire piece, from start to finish, but my absolute favorite is the ending: joy
the earth is cruel with perfect people...& no one anywhere
seems to really care

Powerful!

Your words and passion for the artform inspires me.
Thank You.

<floats out<...
 

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