Black Poetry : EnterNational

[candeesweet]

If We could be fair
I would Love to be able
Throughout the time of lessons
Every Generation is taught the knowledge
From the strugglers that preserved
Enter My heart & teach peace amongst Us
National Means All Of Us
I wonder daily as my mind backslides
The outside overtakes my shell
To begin to be Sloppy cause of knowledge
Nowledge is the ledge of
You give me this & the same goes right back 2 u
From Me
But that’s not me, so I think
I’m losing control
OK well I can’t control All
That’s why
Logics come into play
You straighten your mind
I strengthen my Mind
2 become non judgemental
4 the Sake of us putting guilt behind Us
Then 8 ain’t we living 4 the next generation 2 become
Ultimently *16* stars better & secure of 1 anothers shell​

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[$$RICH$$]

like one unit in whole ..........great write

 

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If We could be fair
I would Love to be able
Throughout the time of lessons
Every Generation is taught the knowledge
From the strugglers that preserved
Enter My heart & teach peace amongst Us
National Means All Of Us
I wonder daily as my mind backslides
The outside overtakes my shell
To begin to be Sloppy cause of knowledge
Nowledge is the ledge of
You give me this & the same goes right back 2 u
From Me
But that’s not me, so I think
I’m losing control
OK well I can’t control All
That’s why
Logics come into play
You straighten your mind
I strengthen my Mind
2 become non judgemental
4 the Sake of us putting guilt behind Us
Then 8 ain’t we living 4 the next generation 2 become
Ultimently *16* stars better & secure of 1 anothers shell​

:flame:

Poet candeesweet,

Yours is a rare and spectacular talent. This piece is cryptic, thought provoking and beautiful. Every word, every line, every nuance were received. Thank you for sharing this remarkable piece of fine art.

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[candeesweet]

Much Thanks from my heart! I Am so glad it touched You n a special wave length! Was given to me for you always!
Love is n the air!