Black Poetry : EnterNational

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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If We could be fair
    I would Love to be able
    Throughout the time of lessons
    Every Generation is taught the knowledge
    From the strugglers that preserved
    Enter My heart & teach peace amongst Us
    National Means All Of Us
    I wonder daily as my mind backslides
    The outside overtakes my shell
    To begin to be Sloppy cause of knowledge
    Nowledge is the ledge of
    You give me this & the same goes right back 2 u
    From Me
    But that’s not me, so I think
    I’m losing control
    OK well I can’t control All
    That’s why
    Logics come into play
    You straighten your mind
    I strengthen my Mind
    2 become non judgemental
    4 the Sake of us putting guilt behind Us
    Then 8 ain’t we living 4 the next generation 2 become
    Ultimently *16* stars better & secure of 1 anothers shell
    :flame: :lift:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    like one unit in whole ..........great write
     
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    Poet candeesweet,

    Yours is a rare and spectacular talent. This piece is cryptic, thought provoking and beautiful. Every word, every line, every nuance were received. Thank you for sharing this remarkable piece of fine art.

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    Much Thanks from my heart! I Am so glad it touched You n a special wave length! Was given to me for you always!
    Love is n the air!