Black Poetry : enjoy the ride.......

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like a butterfly in da wind
    Air blowin thru my wings
    As I sing a joyful song…..
    Lay back and enjoy the ride….
    Taken you on a mind trip…

    Ocean so blue as the waves rock
    Back and forth…a warm breeze
    Floats with scents of you and i…
    Doin our own thang….steal away
    On a cloud of love…hittin every beat
    To the tune we make…
    intertwinin....
    Steamin up the winds
    With a bliss of love……
    Shakin the earth as we interlace
    At our own pace…...
    dancin and
    Caressin the winds…
    as we take this ride..
    Vibin
    thivin
    Twisitn and
    turnin in
    the mood as we play…makin
    love placin thrills on the mind
    gracin
    holdin
    foldin
    rollin
    as we intertwine
    without a notion
    as the emotion grow….
    Motions being made
    as we linger in each others soul…
    blazin a mentally connection
    being persistin as love wont
    resist…as we dance in
    the light of the ocean
    and the waves rock
    as we float….. upon loves
    theme....
    in a bliss of extreme heat
    listen to the heart beat
    as it begins to speak
    as we take this leap........
    in this thing called love....
    lay back and enjoy the ride.......

    blkangel thang 2004
     
  2. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smooooove.....puts me in the mind of that old cut by that crew called "The System"...
    ...reminds me of sunny days ,lazy afternoons layin' up with my baby, lovin this drop.
     
  3. PositiveMindset

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    I enjoyed the scribe...
    I enjoyed the vibe...
    I enjoy your mind.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very very nice scribe love dis one
     
  5. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    See...don't make me come get you woman. :D

    This piece is very nice. Got me all smilin' over here. :D
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ thank you means alot

    Monetary :lol: glad ya smilin
    thanks for the read

    Peace my brothers
    Angel
     
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