Black Poetry : Deletion

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  1. Letitia_onelove

    Letitia_onelove Member MEMBER

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    Attempting to delete you from memory is in vain
    My brain, body and soul scream-
    bless me with his presence again
    I still feel your vibes radiating powerful subliminal energy
    engulfing my mind like rampant wildfires
    Clouded by confusion, I need some type of solution
    You provide the resolution
    I feel you-are you feeling me?
    Or, did your wordplay succeed in seducing my mind
    with facades of you and I spending valuable time- and
    getting involved in various life situations spanning
    present times, past relations and friendly conversations-
    realizations that true mental connections are RARE
    Do you feel me now?
    Completely bare.


    Copyright 2003


     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done tyte write
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of poetic justice of love
    sharing and caring happy to read u & look for more to come

    welcome
     
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    A mental connection like that would be very hard to delete. Your words were potent. Welcome to destee, hope to read more from you.
     
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    uppin this one back for some love ...............
     
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