Black Poetry : Boom! Bam! Splat!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Ireadastory, Aug 3, 2004.

  1. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Boom! Bam! Splat! What you think about that?
    So much going on in the world,
    People passing by and you wonder why?
    You can’t tell if they’re a boy or a girl.

    Then you look on the street,
    And every corner you meet someone who has lost their way,
    And without a word, not so much as a hello to say,
    We walk on to continue our day.

    Bing! Bang! Tee! Just let it be no one cares anymore,
    People can’t help, it’s all about self,
    Driving morals out the door.
    Looking for truth but too many suits in our churches today,
    Can’t find the light to live Godly and right when the preacher is openly gay.

    Watch out now! Skeletons falling out and secrets are being told.
    Try if you can, I mean if that is your plan to believe him when he says “it won’t happen again”
    Well beep bop! Dee drum! Where did that bruise come from?

    Boom! Bam! Splat! What you think about that?
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tic toc off da clock
    dis was hot on da
    spot as u rock it
    wit lyrical beat very nicely pose'd
    continue on poet
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hard to see what's going on in the world if all you can see is self. I hear what you're saying. keep flowing.
     
  4. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thumbs up!

    Welcome 2 the family and Yes this flow is tight indeed!
    I enjoyed it alot!
     
  5. Khasm13

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    interesting use of words... ;)
    nice insight...don't be afraid
    to drop jewels...
    one love
    khasm
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight scribe..
    flow head on....
     
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