Black Short Stories : Abandoned

[cocobutterskyn]

Scribeaboutit! It helps.
CCBSKYN

 

[Kitana]

Coco

I was so glad to see that this story ended the way it did...

too often people let pride get in the way and they lose out on the deal...

K

 

[cocobutterskyn]

Madd Love

sherykah~
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm kinda pleased with it myself.
You know how difficult it is for my to STOP writing.
Yippy! I did it my first short, short story.

Thank you for being you.

Kitana~
You are so right. It's funny to me how just saying a few words,
"I'm sorry, forgive me" can help build a relationship,
but like you said, "pride gets in the way."
It's nice to see you read my story. I dig your storytelling talent.

I thank you both for taking time to read and respond.
It's appreciated.


CCBSKYN

 

[GYPSYMAN]

Cocoa

Straightforward blueprint of the "young thug dilemma"...
glad to see this one end on a positive note...
funny how a little love sometimes can counteract a lifetime of pain..nice story Cocoa ...keep writing !

peace
g-man

 

[$$RICH$$]

tyght story i enjoyed it