Black Short Stories : Abandoned

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
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    Coco

    I was so glad to see that this story ended the way it did...

    too often people let pride get in the way and they lose out on the deal...

    K
     
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    sherykah~
    I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm kinda pleased with it myself.
    You know how difficult it is for my to STOP writing. :laugh:
    :jumping: Yippy! I did it my first short, short story. :jumping:

    Thank you for being you. :)

    Kitana~
    You are so right. It's funny to me how just saying a few words,
    "I'm sorry, forgive me" can help build a relationship,
    but like you said, "pride gets in the way."
    It's nice to see you read my story. I dig your storytelling talent.

    I thank you both for taking time to read and respond.
    It's appreciated. :)


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    Cocoa

    Straightforward blueprint of the "young thug dilemma"...
    glad to see this one end on a positive note...
    funny how a little love sometimes can counteract a lifetime of pain..nice story Cocoa ...keep writing !

    peace
    g-man
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyght story i enjoyed it
     
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    you may not remember me but i use to be a friend of yours until you decided to choose another. i really like this story i to have a story to tell about being abanded by every man that came into my life starting with my father first love dontlive here no more for no man i wish i could love another man but i have to continue to work on me one day at a time. (scandalis)
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GYPSYMAN,

    "funny how a little love sometimes can counteract a lifetime of pain.."

    So true. Thanks for peeking in.


    $Rich$, I'm happy you enjoyed the read.

    charleshandy, This story was centered around a father and son, but daughters need their fathers in their lives also. I'm glad you like the story.

    I appreciate each of you for taking time to read and respond.
    Madd Love

    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
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    it was coco lishious to my mental
     
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