Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Dec 18, 2008.
Introspection at its best. Something to think about for sure. Thanxx
At it's best, perhaps someone can see themselves between the lines, at it's worst, someone will miss what needs to be seen and eleviated. Yes, something to think about for sure. You're quite welcome.
don't let go...
the burdensome weight of life is overwhelming.
effecting my "way to go" stance
didn't have a chance...to
get with you
don't know what to do
the light is dimming
the void of nothingness
i'm disappointed in ME
HELP ME...to overcome my iniquities
to be the man i am supposed to be
from the sullen grasp of my sorrows
might find me
in the hollow of
ALWAYS NICE TO READ YOU.
Life may take an unexpected twist
But why did I fail to see
All the other possible exits out of this maze
that this life has presented to me
Now I may look at other possible answers
as to why things are all askew
I pull out a veil to cover the real reasons
You know, just like I always do
Let me at this time really listen
to what God has to say
for when I don't know which way to turn
God will most certainly lead the way...
Brother baller, I thank you for that wonderful flowback poet. Always nice to read you as well.
wow...well felt sis like a oneway highway
I really love the quality of this flow, especially these lines in green, which I have lived and breathed personally. And yes...I constantly am talking to God, many many times throughout my day.
That highway can lead to a brighter place if we allow it to, thanks Admin Rich.
We never can talk to God too much, and thank goodness for that. Thank you sweetapplepie.
So kindheartedly expressed... you are truly a poetic messenger.
Whenever I notice you dropped something I click on it and settle in
because I know I'm going to enjoyed from start to finish. Thank you!
Awesome, I can only to this piece
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