Black Poetry : Dear God...don't let me die

[PurpleMoons]

This is so heartfelt!
I remember being in
my darkest hours!
And you just described
that pain to a T.
With faith it does
get better. A little rain
helps us to appreciate
the good times.
And I appreciate this piece!

 

[angelicsage]

Thank you all for your kind words...
I wrote this during a very dark time
but never looked at it again...
until I posted it...a few days ago
sometimes poetry is like that
it can make you afraid to face
what is within you...
but I felt posting it...was the first step in overcoming
Sometimes, even pain in poetry can be beautiful...
Thank you all for reading and replying...
My faith grows stronger each day...
just as it has from each of your words!

Liberty...You are a sweet, sweet sister...I see divinity in your words
You've touched me beyond my ability to convey but know it was felt, sincerely.

Watz...You "My Guardian Angel"...

Swt-T...you have always touch me deeply with your words
It was so good to see you...

To all of you (Story, MBA, Gempis, Blue, Money & PurpleMoons..."Neverending Love"

 

[Khasm13]

no one wants to feel the pain
the bitter and extremely tart pain...smh
the way you describe life is amazing sage...
i could actually see myself in some of the places you laid out
with your prose...keep lacing the board with your creativity my sista...
cause it helps me with mine
one love
khasm

 

[PositiveMindset]

I can definitely feel this piece.

The yearning...the hoping...the pleading...the steadfastness...

Very beautiful peace piece, sister.

Do your thing, strong.

 

[triniti424]

It is in the time of deepest pain we become broken and HE becomes whole in OUR hearts
I love you my soul sista and this was so beautiful I felt as if I was reading a Psalm from the mouth of David himself
*momma I wanna be like her * LOL