Black Poetry : ZORA NEALE HURSTON:LUV STYLE

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  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i used tuh luv da way i wuz luvd,
    but ain't loved no mo'.
    so i can't love dez folks,
    like i wuz luvd befo'.
    and i'm so sorry that i can't,
    cuz even if i wanted tuh i coudn't.
    and da way i wuz luvd,
    you show'll woudn't.
    and luv makes me crazy sum time,
    cuz it's alwayz actin' strange.
    and dere's nuthin' i can do,
    that'll make my luv change.
    sum one use tuh luv me,
    and man dat wuz da dayz.
    but time don changed all of dat,
    cuz time,
    don changed,
    my wayz............. :book:
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Lilcherry76...

    That's beautiful...thoughtful. It's rather reflective.

    I love me some Zora. :D

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us. :wink:

    :toast:
     
  3. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx Monetary, i was just bringing back a piece of the old skool style. i got the idea after reading some of "Their Eyes Were Watching God." again, thanx glad to know love is here......... :lips:
     
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    oooooh I'm lovin this and that's one of my favorite authors:wink:
    flow on poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da magical feelings of love
    indeed this was a sweet drop
     
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    very sweet drop
    continue on
     
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    Yes, this does make you just want to sit back and think, I liked this.
     
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    I loved it!...^5 Scribe!...

    this was a 10
     
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    A+++++++++++++++++++++ Nice piece
     
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    thanx to all of those who read and replied, i couldn't have done it without the family, ya'll make me who i am thru the poetry on this site. and i can truly say that i am a part of something special, :spinn: thanx u all......
     
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