Black Poetry : zap the rhyme

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Apr 10, 2004.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My vowels complete, allows heat like the sun
    Bring bright light at night like a star or a holy nun
    Smoking nerds with spoken words, broken herds
    Of MC’S that was saddled to battle with open verbs
    Yet tough when I get rough like sandpaper dun
    Rub and Smooth down wood, soothe renowned hood like cannabis
    Ideal for microphone, heal many domes like evangelists
    So drop to knees too hot for MC’ S like facts by analysts
    At the party my body releases sweat vapors it wet papers
    And let skyscrapers grow tall, give hearses to undertakers
    Like a dusty atmosphere cat rusty it appear in here they fear
    Flavor, got fantastic rhymes like scholastic train minds clear
    Blast it lame for sheer elegance like stocking on brown legs
    Of ladies twist and dangle funk on wrist and ankles drink kegs
    Of wine, then drop cute like sock and boot this legit heat
    Fit feet, these rhyme features even blind creatures’ elite
    So embrace the real wear a face shield then improve the groove
    My field of vision even reveals religion, preach hardcore and smooth
    Need more room to soar and bloom like roses, the scent soothe
    Fakes false get blast so take off the mask no SPRINT phone you lose
     
  2. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reply to maddrapper

    Each and every time I read your poem rhymes
    I say to myself is there no end to his sublimes


     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte madd drop bruh
     
  4. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ALPHA MALE AND RICH thanks for the props for real yall
     
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