Black Poetry : You've Made Me Bitter...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Alizentang, Jul 16, 2003.

  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need a man that knows what it means to be "down"
    It's been one ***** now your *** I'm funa clown
    Coulda had it all, but you like bein broke without a dime
    I'm takin back my:heart:, everything we shared now is mine
    Tried to show you I was down to ride or die
    But you rather have a jumpdown get your nut off tonight
    Go 'head do what it is that you seem to do best
    Messin round, her daddy funa put a slug in yo chest
    You've always had a deathwish, but to go out like this?
    One these lil hoes funa serve you "death's kiss"

    Standin at your coffin, only one tear will drop
    Cause you had a real woman, but your **** couldn't stop
    You'll be remembered by me and all of yo friends
    As the ***** that ****** up time and time again
    Shoulda slowed yo roll, pumped yo **** brakes
    But no matter what we said, no difference it made
    I saw it comin...I told you time and time again
    But I guess you were too busy findin a new **** friend

    So until the day comes when you realize who's true
    I'm sending this blessing from me to you
    I hope you and your jumpdowns have a nice life
    Puttin all your effort into makin a *** a wife
    I know one day later we'll cross each other's path
    But it'll be too **** late, so I'll just keep walkin and laugh!

    Your ex-wifey,
    Alize:D
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...nothing worse than a woman scorned, so they say..

    *whoa*
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let it out and let one know of such
    i feel ya
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who done all that to my baby girl?
     
  5. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah....Oh no did I scare you with this one? LOL. I'm harmless I swear. :laugh:

    $RICH$...Thanks for taking the time to read yet another of my "venting" pieces. Hopefully they will come to an end soon.:)

    MR. 1poetsought... You always find the right thing to make me smile. :D P.S. I got a peek at you in the family album. yum-yum :laugh:
     
  6. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang, you got that type of hatred I had a few months ago :D Tyte srcibe gurl:)
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Alizentang
    feeling ya on this
    letting it flow
    with a blessing
    walking that walk
    sistah
    with a laugh
    Peace
     
  8. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SwtT...Send me some of that secret healing potion that you've been taking:)

    Bluewater...Gotta keep on smiling and laughing otherwise I'd lose my mind! :)
     
  9. Ms. Acqua Di

    Ms. Acqua Di Member MEMBER

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    I feel you!
     
  10. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well, heres the potion

    1 oz of sadness
    4 tablespoons of unanswered qustions
    7 cups of loving yourself
    A whole truckload of forgiveness
     
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