Black Poetry : You've Inspired Me to Write, And That's Too Bad

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kori, Oct 11, 2004.

  1. Kori

    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to somebody, once a friend. :mad:

    Your blatant selfishness has elicited a need for pen and paper
    So, I feel I should speak my mind now rather than later

    I've grown weary of your attention seeking tactics,
    Your "I-don't-want-attention-but-I-ask-for-it" antics

    The anger caused by you is now directed towards a gift
    Between you, and I, clashing personalities cause a rift.

    Your entire personality brings a sickness to my thoughts
    Along with the only child excuse I so ignorantly bought.

    You still leave me hanging, when I try so hard to have your back.
    We no longer have a friendship, Im tired of picking up the slack.

    Selfish, concieted, devious<<<---I can honestly write of you
    I must find a way to get along in life in spite of you.

    A view of your face and the ill will behind it enrages me.
    You're everything I promised myself that I would never be.

    My deep desire lasts no longer to be considered your bestfriend
    Im surprised we've lasted this long; This long goodbye now ends.

    Everyword you speak and thng you do reminds me of the friend I've never had.
    (name omitted), you've inspired me to write, and that's too bad.
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi Kori
    this is a tight flow...the cool thing i like about your flow is how it inspire you to write..to release the disapointment instead of keeping it locked in..now it is within the wind for others to share...wonderful drop..keep the flow flowing..release is indeed a wonderful thing

    Peace~N~Love
    Blue
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heavy deep scribe of release i feel u on dis here
     
  4. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bball: Straight up a good shot of pure poetry!
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    tight flow...releasing is half the battle won
    very nicely posed
     
  6. Kori

    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all! There's another one about this person in the works...I just may thank them again. Its sad that its usually adversity that encourages a person to write.
     
  7. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    treu true
    emotion
     
  8. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Anger is a great motivator. Nice flow!
     
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    applause....applause take your bow poet. NICE flow!
     
  10. Kori

    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank yall for bringing this back up. I appreciate the luv. :D
     
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