Black Poetry : yours

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Dec 13, 2007.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To you I am more than a voice on the other end of the phone
    more than the smile I get to see on occasion.
    I am more than dream you have yet to dream
    or fantasy you have yet to live
    I am more than a whisper on the nite air
    more than the twinkle of the star.
    I am what love means to you
    I am what you need in your life.
    I am yours.
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hahaha

    Oh YEah...I like this
    It's Firm..But Still from the Womans pen
    You are in control of yourself
    And probably know what the other person needs as well
    keep the Flo SIS!

    :10200:
    ~PeaceandLove~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    knowing u belong to one and wit a deeper love feels good
    i see u feeling that and knowing u mean more then what worlds can say
    this was so endearing and sweet
     
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    Wow I really identified with this. You have captued my feels exacly. Great poets do that. I loved it.
     
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    Yes, now that is more than just a pipe dream, you are his dream realized. On point poetess.
     
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    Hi Sister thatgirl74
    Wonderful poem. in just
    9 lovely lines, you have shared with US the love
    of being more, and the joy of knowing just this
    Peace~N~Love
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for lettin me express myself. And thank you for listenin.
    Fatt
    Humbled by you comments. I am happy you can relate. YOu and I think on the same wave length. YOu pen my thoughts just as often as I pen yours.
    Watz
    Seems like I always have a poem about love eeking out of me. Thanks as always for the positive feedback.
    $$R$$
    To have you listen to me and give me back such love is always so
    humbling.

    Blue
    Thank you also for the feedback. I feel so honored when Poets like You and $$R$$ and Watz and Queen all give me love. I am humbled.
    Thanks again.
     
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