Black Poetry : ...you're under arrest.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Feb 5, 2002.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...you're under arrest.
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet sunshyne, gurl...do you know how tyght this piece is??? well let me just be the first to let you know that it truly is. i'm lovin' it, dear friend!
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so [email protected] tyte. :jawdrop:

    tellin mama.
    j.
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    diggin

    the creativity flowin throughout this joint.... I C ain't even no need to try and coerce you into some kinda plea bargain...huh Sunshyne??? (and you go'n do some serious hard time, too ain'tcha sis?) :D

    lovededed this!

    a
     
  5. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're on fire girl!!!

    Your pieces just have so much realism, such truth.
    And so much **** creativity!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I know this feeling very well and its a good feeling
    to have. Everybody should be so lucky.
    I think you're reading my journal now!!!!:)
    I'm about to find a new hiding place for it...
    :heart: ya!!!
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    F@*K it then....

    I'm hella guility as sin!!!!

    Lock my *** up and give me the 'lectric chair!!!! :laugh:

    This piece was "arresting" to say the least!!!

    Transcended the normal poetess you have...

    Diggin' ya from behind closed eyes BlakGurl!!!! :cool:

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  7. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!

    Going to da chapel, huh!!
    Congrats! Major props, girl on this one.
    This only could have been orchestrated and said in such a way by you to share this lovely piece with us.
    Thanks so much.
    Loved the read.
    Much love and happiness for the both of you 2.
    Nice to see somebody happy once in a while ya know! ha ha ha
    Thanks girl, I really felt this.
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AlwaysThanks!


    KL. thank You for bein' the 1st to hit dis one!
    thanks for the love dear sweet friend... you know
    i think you're da bomb right? when you gonna post??

    JP. many, many thanks lil brother of mine.
    what would i do wit out cha? you still tellin?? :D

    Alyce. LOL... hard time?? no pun intended i'm
    sho... right? :lol: i'm glad you enjoyed this! & some
    how i KNEW you would understand this heah! :)

    Dani. lil Sis! thank you! have i told you late-ly
    that you make me shyne? thanks for the love! &
    the comps... they mean a LOT! :heart:

    GeeQue. thanks for stoppin' by... i'm glad
    you enjoyed the piece. your praise is foreva &
    eva appreciated! :)

    Stormy. hey you! thanks for the read & the
    reply... but umm... who's goin' to da chapel? well
    unfortunate-ly... its not my turn for that! but, i'll
    keep ya posted! :wink:
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no, no, no...u r truly da bomb, my sweet dear friend. i got somethin' comin'. it will be a follow up from my "I Cried For You", piece.
     
  10. hi-wa

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    auite GA girl. u came wit it.

    i'm glad my handcuffs ain't too tight
    and u don't have a problem
    assuming tha "position"
    i'm thinking i should lose the key
    and foreva keep u a captive
    in my soul's innermost caverns
    remebering patterns of life before your entrance into the gate
    wiping the slate clean of all our bad times
    replacin them with good times and your sweet poetry lines
    hoping the bars will rust shut so u can go nowhere
    but foreva in my soul's asylum
    driving u crazy.

    thanx fa da inspiration to reply.
    lu' ya piece

    ya boi,
    hw
     
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