Black Poetry : You're Relatively Beautiful

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Apr 5, 2007.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you may never get the chance to know

    that your inner glow

    travels faster than the speed of light

    to my heart

    Einstein never figured on your existence

    and from the start

    of my insistence

    the nuclear power radiating from your charm

    powered up all the equipment on my farm

    my persistence

    is definitely justified



    love,

    howard
     
  2. BrandNewMe

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    It feel as your heart have been capture
    Very nice poem
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems apparent that she is your sun. Your words are illuminating, howard.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You make me float Howard:)


    Much Luv
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey howard, nice poem.. good to see your heart en script once again:spinstar:

    :hearts4:
     
  6. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice piece poet keep your pen moving
    7/10
     
  7. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i will tantrum

    thanks guys
     
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