Black Poetry : You're My Ispiration

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Ireadastory, Sep 13, 2004.

  1. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You’re my inspiration,
    You’re the Spirit behind the gift.
    My understanding in the midst of confusion.

    I believe that the sky is blue because of you,
    I believe in justice for all,
    Fair justice will fight against evil justice, and righteous justice will see us through.

    Bad things happen to good people,
    And good things happen to bad people,
    So, what’s your complaint?

    He made the world with balance,
    Things may not seem fair but in His eyes it’s equal.
    Blessings waiting,
    Prayers have been heard,
    Believing in faith but don’t know the Word.

    You’re my inspiration,

    You’re the Spirit of hope,
    My friend in the silence of loneliness.

    I believe that the rain is beautiful and that it’s not appreciated,
    I believe that the sun is too hot and that it’s over rated.

    I’m just saying you’re my inspiration.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very nice and peaceful
    thanks for sharing this scribe
    nice work

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's so beautiful to have an Inspirational to inspire u
    this was sweetly pose'd , this my hope and dream to
    be an inspiration
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flow....the way you balanced your phrases with the concept of this poem. The meter and the wording went hand and hand. Well written poet.
     
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    This was a nice simple scribe.....it's good to be in that position to inspire someone...just knowin that my ways or the things that I do influences the way someone else does things....
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    may you continue to be inspired..so that we continue
    to read your creative energies..i enjoyed your flow..
     
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    this piece embodied an air of serenity...
    having that kind of inspiration is always
    consoling...

    Great job poet!
    Sage
     
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