Black Poetry : You're Maintaining my Position

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Apr 27, 2007.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i tried but i failed

    to become your ginger ale

    then i cried when you yelled

    that i'm not your fairy tale

    but i sighed when your heart swelled at my suggestion that Taco Bell

    could help us see that destiny lied when we fell before our ship could set sail

    to Fantasy Island



    love,

    howard
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    fo real man .......like how u buff this one out
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Determined to reach that destination. I hear ya, poet.
     
  4. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, i enjoy how u used name brand things to express what the poem was getting across


    very interesting


    Mz.Soulll
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello howard:
    So nice to read you again.
    Don't give up, give it another try.
    Once again you made me smile.

    Much Luv:)
     
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