Black Poetry : You're in Her Mind

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  1. waynethomas

    waynethomas Active Member MEMBER

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    You're in her mind.

    And it doesn't matter if she's
    Black
    White
    Claims to be stupid
    Or just plain simply blind,
    You're in her mind.

    If she even shows that front that
    She don't care,
    Your still there.

    And you're there because...
    She wants you to be.

    The powers that be
    Weren't a split thought to she
    Because you are what
    Her mind naturally
    Instantly
    Paints emotionally colourfully.

    Genesis 3:16 said it was a sin to she,
    So these emotions she's craving
    To be unconditionally at that moment
    Receiving
    Is why she gave in
    To the "power" of your game
    You thought you where applying.

    It's irrelevant you see
    Because remember...
    You're there because she wants you to be.

    But think
    Before you give her that gift you want her to receive
    Because
    Abusing our actions of fertility
    Doesn't just effect the current seed that could be now growing inside she -
    Premeditated or mistakenly -
    But
    A mental state of
    Generations,
    On how we respect our women of all nations.

    And it doesn't matter if you
    Make clear your intentions,
    Put your mother
    Sister
    Present or future daughter in that situation...

    My mother
    My sister
    My daughter?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    great scribe poet
     
  3. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Absolutely Beautiful, alot of men would go crazy if somebody did their mother, sister or daughter, so what gives them the right to do so many others mother, sister or daughter wrong? Great message
     
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    I enjoy your poetic messages...



    Antidotal thoughts I think.

    Great write!


    feelin'itsouldeep!

    Coco:dance:
     
  5. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Drop Mr Wayne

    Dig the vibe you bringing wit dis one
    Flo On Poet!
     
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