Black Poetry : You're Fighting Me Away

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if i could rub you the right way

    after the initial shock and dismay

    i'd massage your shoulders nite and day

    but what are the right words to say?

    to convince you to let a TWA flight take us away

    to Paris where we could romantically fight and play

    like soulmates



    love,

    howard
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THAT WAS LUVLY, BRATHA I THINK U IN LUV BY THE WAY U WRITE YO RHYMES OF LUV, CUZ THE FEELIN U EXPRESS THRUGH YO POEMZ SEEM SO REAL, BUT MOSTLY I WAS FEELIN YO FLO LIKE ALWAYZ
    MUCH LUV


    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    maybe i am, but it's not what i thought

    my common sense tells me i should have caught

    her by now, if true love were possible

    i think someone else will enjoy her popcicles

    this summer :weights:



    i appreciate the comment though
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    O MY BRATHA U R SO WELCUM, BUT U C I FEEL THE SAME WAY BOTH SUMONE, U C HE IS CHASIN ME, BUT I AM HARD 2 GET, BUT NO THE TABLES HAVE TURNED AND NOW I AM CHASIN HIM, MYBE YO SITUATIONZ MITE CHANGE LIKE DAT, ONCE U STOP CHASIN SHE MITE BEGIN, U KNO WUT GOES AROUND CUMZ AROUND, BUT IF IT IZ MENT TO BE THEN IT WILL SURLY HAPPEN

    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks :smooch:
     
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