Black Poetry : YOU'RE ALWAYS ON MY MIND

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  1. poetic_diva

    poetic_diva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YOU'RE ALWAYS ON MY MIND
    ALL DIFFERENT TYPES OF TIMES
    MORNING
    NOON
    AND NIGHT
    EVEN WHEN THE TIMES NOT RIGHT

    YOU'RE ALWAYS ON MY MIND
    SITTING HERE DREAMIN
    ABOUT YOU
    ABOUT US
    THE INSIDE OF MY HEAD SCREAMIN
    STOP, IT'S JUST NOT RIGHT

    BUT I'M WEAK FOR YOU
    WISHING MY HEAD WAS
    STRONGER THAN MY HEART
    HOPING ONE DAY WE DON'T
    ALWAYS HAVE TO BE APART

    YOU'RE ALWAYS ON MIND
    INVADING MY SLEEP
    STEALIN MY DREAMS
    TURNING THEM TO FAIRY TALES
    NO OTHER MALES
    CAN COMPARE
    FOR YOU I'LL BARE
    IT ALL
    JUST DON'T LET US FALL

    YOU'RE ALWAYS ON MY MIND
    STEALING MY TIME
    STEALING MY SANITY
    HOW I WISH THIS WASN'T A FANSTAY

    YOU'RE ALWAYS ON MY MIND
    WISHING WE KEEP THE TIES AND
    MAKE THEM BIND
    MY ONE AND ONLY LOVE
    I DID FIND

    YOU'RE ALWAYS ON MY MIND
    AT WORK
    AT CHURCH
    WHILE I'M TAKING A BATH
    DREAMIN WE COULD WALK
    THE SAME PATH

    YOU'RE ALWAYS ON MY MIND
    I KNOW WERE MILES APART
    BUT MY HEART
    I DID GIVE YOU
    I CAN'T DO THIS WITHOUT YOU
    BECAUSE YOU'RE ALWAYS ON MY MIND


    :love: :love: :spin: :fairy: :wink: ;) :rolling: :flirt: :luv: :jumping: :shades: :luvv: :wave: :roll: :kiss: :kiss: :tongue: :star: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :sand: :sand:

    POETIC_DIVA

    "I CAN DO ALL THINGS THROUGH CHRIST, WHICH STRENGHTENS ME" PHILIP 4:13
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Picture the strength, Poetic Diva!

    Works for me, I loves it.
     
  3. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetic_diva, Love is scintillating brilliance flashing through the mind
    In darkness it thunders through the minds of all souls called mankind
    Enjoy the Now enjoy the day because time takes wings and flies!


    Great poem you have made
    Now go and seize a great day

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You

    If you read and replied once!
    Do it again, kick up a notch!----------Thank you
     
  4. poetic_diva

    poetic_diva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS SO VERY MUCH FOR REPLYING.
    ~1POETSOUGHT, I'M GLAD YOU LOVED IT.
    ~ALPHA MALE, THANKS FOR THE WONDERFUL WORDS.

    MUCH LOVE AND MANY BLESSING TO YOU BOTH.

    POETIC_DIVA

    "I CAN DO ALL THINGS THROUGH CHRIST, WHICH STRENGTHENS ME" PHILIP 4:13
    :love: :love: :love: :spin: :spin: :spin: :x: :x: :fairy: :nono: :wink: :wink: :wink: :love: ;) ;) :rolling: :rolling: :flirt: :flirt:
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love the flip on this dip here poetic flow on scribe
     
  6. Poetic Pride

    Poetic Pride Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good piece

    This was a lovely piece...you know it's funny when we fall in love...you start dreaming about him, thinking about him day noon and night, when you're apart for 2 days it feels like 2 weeks..2 weeks feels like 2 years. But don't let a man invade your thoughts so much that all you live for is him.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love has a way of invading your peace
    and replacing it with an overwhelming "peace"... :wink:

    Heartfelt Expression...
    Thanks for sharing this lovely part of you with us!
     
  8. poetic_diva

    poetic_diva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$Rich$$~Thanks for the reply

    Poetic_Pride~Thanks for the reply, I know exactly what you mean about being in love that the other person consumes all your time. This is an old piece that I wrote, when I was foolish. LOL, I have grown, it's ok to fall in love but don't let that person take over your mind, body and soul. What happens when its all over? So I had to learn the hard way only once, but darn it I learned it. Glad you liked the piece. Much love and many blessings. Peace.

    Poetic_Diva

    "I can do all things through Christ, which strenghtens me" Philip 4:13
    :flirt: :love: :love: :love: :spin: :spin: :fairy: :fairy: ;) ;) ;) :wink: :wink: :toast:
     
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