Black Poetry : Your Words

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Dec 3, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the furthest corner of my heart
    Your words reach me
    Carried by doves in the winds of spring

    Gently they rest
    Not to disturb the incessant beating
    But to follow in the rhythm
    Moving me
    Forcing my smile

    I succumb to their power
    Unable to maneuver them
    Each syllable its own force
    Taking me where you wish
    Where I need to be

    A place of love within the words
    Soft, strong, gentle
    Intelligent
    Persuasive in content
    Magical in flow
    Blindly I read
    To be with you

    BE

    (c) Bruce H. Edwards, 2001
     
  2. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mr. Beat

    this is perfection. Your words....her words.... beautiful poetry.

    wow

    SWT
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Mr.Lover loverrrrrrr!!!!!

    dis be like harvey wall banger
    love da flow of yo sweet lover show!:heart:
     
  4. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you much.
     
  5. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin this.

    BRB
     
  6. Maggie

    Maggie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is priceless...


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