Black Poetry : Your Woman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Ireadastory, Jul 29, 2004.

  1. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to feel like a woman,
    Passion
    Desire
    Sex Appeal

    I want to be loved physically and emotionally. Make love to my intellect first and then my body, all of it, from head to toe. I want the tingle sensation that tingle right before a love orgasm when oooooooh! “the spot” has been found.

    Talk to me – what’s on your mind, in your heart? I want to feel like your woman; that you want me, lust for me, desire me and would do anything for me.
    Then talk to me! Open up the doors of communication meet me half way.
    Be the whole to my half.
    Take back your manhood – I don’t want it, I never have.

    I’m glad that Victoria has a secret and that Fredrick went to Hollywood, they understood my predicament that I lost my womanhood.
    Oh where! Oh where! Oh where could it be?
    I searched my past and it wasn’t there…
    I searched my future couldn’t see that far…
    I searched the present but loneliness was blocking the way.

    I just want to feel like a woman, your woman. The woman with full lips, baby brown eyes, a handful of breasts and a well rounded shapely butt,
    Am I asking too much?

    To be your woman is to love you no matter what, do anything, be anything that you want me to be.
    Your breakfast, lunch, dinner and dessert too. Your woman, a woman is what I am saying to you.

    Take back your manhood – the bills, the provision, the final decision.
    Give me back my womanhood – the skirt, the pumps and the lace panties too.
    You be the provider and I’ll be the nurturer, balance is what it is all about.
    I want to feel like a woman, your woman.
     
  2. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice piece every woman should celebrate being a woman
    especally when the men overlook that they are important beings too
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister...

    I'm with you...

    Revel in your womanhood...

    Nothing feels better than to have it all...

    Nice peace...
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You sound like a woman who knows what she wants, and that makes for a positive vibe. Keep those flows coming sista.
     
  5. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I REALLY CAN RELATE TO THIS PIECE. IT LIKE YOU'RE SPEAKING MY LIFE.
    THANK YOU, FOR SHARING YOUR WORK. MAY PEACE BE YOUR COMFORT, AND I PRAY THAT YOU'LL BE BLESSED TO REDISCOVER YOUR WOMANHOOD.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling all dis here u say it so well
     
  7. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really enjoyed this...specifically these lines... great job

    and

    No, my sista, I don't think you're asking too much at all...
     
  8. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Perhaps he's sitting somewhere writting the same lines too. If not, I'm sure when he read this...he'll sleep at your door.. very good scribe. thanks for sharing
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i enjoyed this read...thanks for sharing :)
    come join us in chat soon!!!!
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    Peace
    Angel
     
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