Quiet Poetry Lounge : Your Wall

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Feather, Sep 12, 2011.

  1. Feather

    Feather Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the weight of your prose​
    anchor a ship​
    i cry your​
    uncried tears​
    trapped in your pride​
    wrentching​
    unjustfied animosity​
    swallowing your dignity​
    youve rejected me​
    my love would cure your disease​
    though youve went head in​
    swimming in despair​
    and you hide from those with help to rescue​
    who draw near​
    awaken your heart from​
    anguish​
    and self pitty​
    uncover the keyhole​
    for loves key​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully written love this piece sis......
     
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    :)
     
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    you write a piece about the walls we put up that stops love, protect us from love, yet you ask if i think love has limitations. we put up walls because of the PAINS we've endured IN THE NAME OF LOVE. that started with our first love...and successive loves...which prevents us from loving wholy again. our hearts are fragile...and we want to protect it.

    A MOVING PIECE YOU'VE DROPPED HERE.

    keep doing what you do.
     
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    lol this is of what i see in a lot of people even if you mean them no harm they are nasty rude and so mean. it hurts, but this poem was not about me (smile) i think i'm an exception, pain to me is inevitable and I welcome it when it knocks jk,; however I know ill be stronger thereafter. I have chosen to make myself vulnerable being cautious of course and i chose a long time ago that i would not retaliate against men who had not hurt me. I would give them a chance to know my love and I hope for the same and i knew if i got hurt in the process it was worth it to find him. i refused to let my pain take away my ability to love. for me there will never be another pain like my first betrayal but as of love i took all of mine with me (smile). I think finding love is like childbirth it hurts so much to go through the process but once you have your baby in your arms all the pain cease to ever have existed.
     
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