Quiet Poetry Lounge : Your Voice...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Dec 27, 2006.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's a voice that I want to hear
    again and again and again
    How can I quite explain a voice
    that stimulates the ink in my pen
    You lull me with the words that you speak
    Explaining the kind of woman that you seek
    Almost hypnotizing, your vocal tone
    a gentle force that's yet to be known
    Yet it sounds like home to me
    A welcome mat that beckons my feet
    to take a step inside of your portal,
    chose a comfy chair, and dare to take a seat
    It's a voice that makes me want to stay a while
    One that wraps me with sincere warmth
    making me radiate sunshine with my smile
    And once my smile beams it's rays into you
    You'll know that your gut feeling was true
    And why my pen really had no other choice
    but to be driven and compelled to write about...
    Your voice....
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello sista watz:

    I like, I like...
    I'm really feeln' you on this scribe.
    It's amazing what the sound of a voice
    can do.

    Beautiful write.

    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    that voice again and again u hear
    taps at the pen to speak so openly
    wow !! i wish a voice can do this to me....
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes 4everluv, the sound of a voice can be quite inspiring. Thank you sista.
    Rich, I think a voice has done that to you a time or two. Thank you brotha.
     
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    loveconquersall New Member MEMBER

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    feelin' your flow

    love the flow in this piece..it reminds me of when I'm looking for inspiration to write.
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wasn't really looking for the inspiration, his voice left an impression which inspired me to write. Your comments are appreciated loveconquersall.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I don't know if it was the voice or the pen or what i seen ....lol
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well...perhaps it was all three, a triple threat, lol. Thanks again for your support Rich.
     
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    is that what u do to me .......a triple threat thing !!!!
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, er, um...I'm not sure. Not really a poetic answer, huh? Rich, you're a mess, smh. :)
     
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