Black Poetry : your touch..

Giovanni

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trying to kiss my image,
project'd against your sweaty glaze,
I fell into your skin; a reflective pool
I tread through for balance.

been a while since I felt your touch.
still remember how your lips were curious hands
learnin' my entire body.

you were my evening shade,
learn'd how to make my backbone skip
like stones across a transparent body of water.

your touch subdued me, had me on my knees
pluckin' petals off the rose between your legs,
i'm a moth drawn to the heat between you.

you loved how I touch'd you there, & rearrang'd your pubic hairs;
where it got hot enough to put a part between your lips, where sighs
road sour on the funk of us, touchin' each other.

we play'd naked,
bodies makin' faces at one another
like ridiculin' 4yr. olds.

I was that ball of yarn,
your ***** want'd to get caught up in.

I'll never forget how I fell into you
like a pool, and let you surround me.
 
Gio...u know i look at you like my younger brother so,

what you doing talkin' bout sex....hahahaha..just kidding. hee hee.

this was a nice piece...you got them skills to be coming off the top...i can only do it sometimes though...and i only freestyle outloud when no one is around me because it be so whack, that info need not be shared with others, na'mean...word..but er um...word...getting back to the topic at hand...

yeah...the only thing i saw a little bit out of sorts with one line in this piece was when you said this:

"my tongue was a bee pollenated by your pubic flower."

i think that you meant
my tongue was a bee pollenating your pubic flower.
Or
my tongue was a bee that pollenated your pubic flower.

because the way you say it, you're saying that the flower is pollenating the bee but bees pollinate flowers...okay that is my criticism...get on the ball, Gio...you're slackin'...just kiddin'...i'm playin fah real. i digged this piece. imagery from you is always nice and unique. word.
 

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