Black Poetry : Your To Good For Him

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by unfoolish1223, Mar 31, 2004.

  1. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your in a situation u
    feel like u cant get
    out of, but truth be told
    u havent really tried...
    u say u love him, but yet
    he loves someone else...
    he may tell u he cares
    and he wants more,
    but yet he comes over
    at all these weird times
    just to feel sexually
    satisfied...he got a kid with her and
    even lives with her...that
    should tell u hes not worth
    your time...if hes doing her
    like that he will never do
    u any different...u are
    truly beautiful and not
    even the world is good
    enough for u...Ive known
    u for 3 months now and yea
    we messed around, but u wont let it
    go further and hes part of
    the reason...please explain
    to me why...I always give
    u all my time...and I would
    do anything in my power
    to make sure your always
    alrite cuz the pleasure is all mine
    when I know your satisfied
    I would give u everthing
    u ever could need...we spend
    hours upon hours on the phone
    and just that alone makes me
    somewhat complete...u inspire
    me to be the highest me...
    let me inspire u to be
    the highest u...lets act
    on our attractions and go
    to a place made for just me and u...
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really like this.....nice..
     
  3. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks glad u like
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nicely posed
    flow on
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    time is of the essence...
    she know as well or better than you that he's a thorn in her side but...only SHE can remove that thorn. maybe what she needs is time to say :wave: to no-hope...and hello to :luvv: ...
    hang in there...she'll soon see the light.
     
  7. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks and hopefully she will say goodbye and see the light
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Perhaps her heart is just not ready to see clearly yet. I really liked the way you brought this.
     
  9. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love everyone and letting me know not to give up
     
  10. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling this

    i have been there before also