Black Poetry : Your the one....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It may have been others before you
    But you’re the one
    I loved the one I adored
    As you took my breath
    As I walk through the door
    You walk beside me no matter what
    Thick and thin
    With the happy times and the bad
    You’re the one……
    My best friend my midnight lover
    Made my dark come to light
    Lift me up when I am down
    Make me smile when I don’t want to
    You’re the one…
    Like a far off time you were there
    Holding my hand
    Hidden in a hush
    Wanting to scream
    As tears run…
    You are the one
    Not even a kiss nor a touch
    But I feel your love
    Over and over again
    As we intertwine in heavenly divine
    Peace was in us as we did our thing
    Together and alone
    And dance that fine line
    You were the one
    It may have been othersbefore you
    But you’re the one I love
    You’re the one I see my future with
    But you’re the one that is hurting me
    Making me cry
    You’re the one who left in the wind
    Not I……
    Taken my heart and walking all over it
    You’re the one
    You’re the one….
    See it may have been others before you
    But you’re the one
    Said we will make this be like no other
    It can be done if you believe
    Well I believe in us
    But is that good enough
    Do you believe
    Hell what do I really mean to you
    For you to do the things you do…
    Was it or is it a game
    Like an untamed lion
    That broke wild out of a cage
    But leave in a rage
    In a hush you walk
    And for get about the one who loves you
    No matter the dark
    Because we made light together
    Using my love to get by….
    Was that it
    Until something came better
    See you’re the one
    Use to rock laugh and play
    Talk about the future talk about our families
    And all the pains we been through
    It may have been others but you’re
    The one
    I love
    The one I adore
    Hell do you even care?
    You’re the one……

    (c) 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was nicely pose'd to that great someone
    flow on !
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you..hope he get a grip ya know or i am gonna have to just ummm :bam: some sense in him soon....:)
    thanks agian for the love Angel
     
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    Tell him again, girl! This piece is what we women say on a regular basis to non-hearing men. Tell him again! :)
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    " You are the one
    Not even a kiss nor a touch
    But I feel your love
    Over and over again "

    I enjoyed this very much. I know you understand the quote above, but there is something special about love. Even if it flows only in one heart for another. It carries the same intensity of two rivers mounting the same path for the great ocean called hope..distance can't diminish the pounding current. Love rising Falling, curving all enthralling flow. Gripping and spellbounding. Love is pounding. The walls of the valley. :luvv:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt this. And like toylin says, it's what women often have to say to be heard. And yea, I guess when all else fails, that bat works well too. Flow on.
     
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    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful write Angel, I hope we all find that one in our lifetimes, and are able to hold on to that person, and be the one to that person, like the person is that one to us!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love and support on this...... :angel1: