Black Poetry : Your Smooth Onyx Stone

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Oct 9, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your smooth, onyx stone

    parted my waters
    leaving no superficial
    traces where you
    entered....

    beautifully

    yet can I feel your fluidity
    mixing fresh/salty
    joy through my liquids....
    your rippling affect
    has altered my course ~

    irrevocably...

    below, in the warm depths
    of my pools...there is a
    definite stirring
    my soul is swept away
    with you in the undertow...

    happily

    the rapids are frothy & fierce
    above as we ride...
    the stream of our love
    is ever widening...
    rushing into the
    river of us....the banks will
    overflow...soon

    naturally

    and I will hold on to you
    as you carry us to
    the ocean....

    effortlessly...

    where we shall know
    the pleasure/pain
    of
    ebb and flow

    taste & see
    what it
    means to "be"

    eternally


    Alyce, (c) 2001

    From, "B-52"
     
  2. Maggie

    Maggie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoaaaa!

    I almost CAN'T take it! But I'm compelled to KEEP READIN! Flow now! :wink:

    DAYUM! (smooth, onyx stone huh?) DAYUM!

    maggie
     
  3. ladyx

    ladyx Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the perfect

    answer to the perfect call of love....tell us about him, A! Tell us all about it!

    much :heart: up in heah!

    x
     
  4. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep
    Like the ocean of which you speak
    Priceless
    Like the stone itself
    Arousing
    Like the afterthoughts that will be endless

    Thank you for sharing this gem.

    BE
     
  5. sexe1

    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is really nice....Keep it coming:eek:
     
  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your words of love always seem to come from some higher plane..another level of feeling, that we can only read and feel in awe of...it's as if you invented the whole concept of what is beautiful between a man and a woman...you continually amaze me with the depth of your writing...

    K
     
  7. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeeeeah,

    uh huh.

    BRB
     
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