Black Poetry : Your scent

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by innerbeauty, Jun 23, 2004.

  1. innerbeauty

    innerbeauty Member MEMBER

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    You walk past me everyday..and i cant help but to admire the scent of your flesh..keeps me feeling high i couldnt control it if i tried.
    High like the feeling of a tightly rolled blunt, with a glass of hennessy on the side.
    ****...
    and ..You're
    All G'd up with your casual clothes on, Thug/businessman, why would't it turn me on
    You sit professionally all sophisticated as you make business calls on the phone.
    the phone i wish i was on..Sitting in my corner all alone.
    But do you notice me noticing you?
    admiring your body of perfection,just watching you from the side
    I should've talked to you then but i tried,
    tried to tell you
    i love you...or maybe its your scent,
    maybe thats irrelevant,
    where the physical attraction went.
    The scent of this blackman ,has me feeling butterflies inside, but at the same time intoxicated.
    I have come to love, what the scent of your cologne and flesh has formulated.
    let me tell you that i..
    **** let me calm down and get situated...
    I feel your touch when you pass me, but your hands never leave your side.
    you always walk by me caressing me, your fingers creeping gently up my thighs.
    **** those eyes..
    **** i get horny off of your scent,
    and you take this woman to another level..
    A level of lust,
    Right now im like,
    **** trust
    Just take me and make me if you must,
    im here and im not going any where..I want our bodies to be one let me take you there.
    Just lay there for a minute so i can gently kiss you on your neck,
    you're not wanting this to happen so fast,
    According to most black women you're definetly labeled a man with respect,
    take me..
    Okay, let me get back to reality.
    I have to prepare my self for another day, As im feeling warm and moist inbetween
    mentally and emotionally being quietly seduced is what i mean.
    When the aroma of your flesh passes me it, it excites me everytime,
    but you cant tell.
    That you've created pure ectasy for me, with the prescence of your smell
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i do no just what you mean :)
    oh the scent as the brothers past by
    like a wonderful ever lasting memory
    that will always produce a smile
    nice indeed
    keep the flow flowing
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was well felt i hear ya on dis
    speak on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The right scent can definitely take you there, yes. Very sensually written.
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You created such energy and
    such a sense of urgency in this piece...
    I must say...this was some FIRE :hot:
    and I do mean "SMOKIN"...

    Nice Work :toast:
     
  6. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    preach poet! Nothing like a sweet smelling brother :driveby:
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    go head on i know whatcha mean
    Peace
    Angel
     
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