Quiet Poetry Lounge : Your responsibilities.......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nevar, Oct 19, 2009.

  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your responsibilities
    is not a possibility
    My responsibilities
    is not a opportunity
    It is my duty to care and nuture, and bring them up God's way
    I can't help but to say
    in this situation
    You have caused me undue pain and grief
    Every time I see you on the street
    Your acting like we never shared the same bed
    Broke bread
    But now our resposibilities is my responsibilities
    Struggled to put food on the table
    You wasn't able
    To give me the change to qwell the hunger pains
    The strain
    I had to go through
    Cause you
    Didn't give a hot [email protected] if she cried, laughed, or even existed
    It's twisted
    How I see you taking care of your other kids
    You chose to put a lid
    On our kid
    So you choose to just
    Walk on by
    Walk on by
    Walk on by
    I stop crying
    Along time ago
    You had me weak
    I've reached my peak
    With this
    You blew me away with your deceptive kiss
    As all you cared about was
    What's between my legs
    Yeah, you didn't beg
    But I let you enter between my legs
    I can't lie
    The loving was good between my thigh's
    As I let you have a piece of me, and in return you gave me
    A piece of you
    You
    Said
    You will always be there
    No matter what
    What
    What
    What
    Is on repeat
    The heat
    I carried
    I carried upon my shoulders
    Heavy boulders
    As Grand Canyon
    didn't have nothing on me
    I made a plea
    To get you to take care
    Share
    Equal
    Responsibilities
    I see looking back
    How you was wack
    And the facts
    Still remain
    Mr. Lame
    That this dame
    Raised
    Conquered
    Overcomed
    Survived
    Courageous
    Outstanding
    Superficial
    Phenomonal
    All these qualities gave me the strength to raise our child
    And even though you maybe laughing on the outside
    But in the inside you just a scared little boy with a pen that
    writes blanks
    Even though through this transaction I gave birth to a winner
    Your contribution to the world now cough up
    Access Denied
    Broke down to a mere morsel
    Asking for handouts
    It's funny how shyte comes back to you
    I'm living proof
    That no matter what comes your way
    I'm always going to be a Phenomonal
    Woman!
    Taking care of your
    Responsibilities!!!!!!


    Lavette112/Nevar112
    Copyright 2009
    Access Denied
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  2. Stormy

    Stormy Member MEMBER

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    Of course I know your pain I share the same lame legacy. Hopefully one day they will come to thier senses and realize what we already know and see in the seeds of the lame deeds bestowed upon us by those two from the same breed! Love ya girl, we will make it, it wont break us but make us stronger!
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew. Mouthful! Loved it. Been there ad you doing it. Thanks
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you both for your love on this piece.....i'm going to have this piece done as a spoken piece......so be looking out for that!
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Sho ya right!

    You represented! :toast:
     
  6. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you so much for the love cherryblossom!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    do yo thang sister , very well said i can feel ya
     
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