Black Poetry : Your Poem

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Oct 9, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'd love to be in your poem
    Entwined with the rhythm and the rhyme
    Floating between and among your words
    Up close and personal with each syllable
    Part of your heart and soul
    Words you create
    Make me part of the evolution

    Put me there
    Place me in the intricate parables
    Let me feel the meaning
    Let me touch the pain and sorrow
    Let me alone read the fine print
    I'll live between the lines

    I will cherish the honor
    Devote myself to understanding this art
    Being inside
    Your poem
    Your song
    You

    BE

    (c) Bruce H. Edwards, 2001
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice BE............

    and surely u r inside many as we all r
    yet inside is the key.......i like how u played
    this out...:D
     
  3. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man!

    write it - write it - w r i t e i t !

    in your poem...song...you?
    creative...!

    intense reading~
     
  4. ladyx

    ladyx Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How this sings

    how it tells of the most exquisite experience....it haunts me so, because I'm sure I've heard this melody before.

    Write Poet. Write as you are also written.


    x
     
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    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a good read!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are

    poetry....

    and when you bring the words; words that dare to touch the unspeakable...I am rendered

    speechless.


    awesome, Poet

    a
     
  7. honeebrownsuga

    honeebrownsuga Active Member MEMBER

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    Uuuhh...uh

    I am at a loss:jawdrop:

    Magnificent!

    Please don't punish us
    by not rewarding us
    with more!

    Thank u 4 sharing :heart:
     
  8. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Poets.

    BE
     
  9. sexe1

    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked this a lot....keep it coming!!:eek:
     
  10. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the motion of the body intertwined with beautiful words
    that fit together perfectly as one...
    being one...a natural connection...

    K
     
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