Black Poetry : Your Poem

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "YOUR POEM"
    I will write you a love poem.
    I will give you all the passion of a single moments embrace in the sunlight,
    under some lush and gently moving ivy overhang.
    Would this please you?
    Would you then know that I am yours?
    Would you believe these words in all their compromising positions?
    Words strung so beautifully before your lips,
    in scents of vanilla and sweet just for you?
    All for you?
    Because of you?
    Only for you?
    And would you then know that I am serious?
    That I am a poet?
    That I believe in the juice of poetry.
    Would you believe that you can find love in the simplest parts of me?
    Find it unbathed and luscious before the coming up of a single ray of morning.
    Yes,
    this is your love poem,
    swelling of romance,
    letter by resonating letter.
    You should know by this that I am yours,
    I am all yours,
    I AM YOUR POEM.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I begin to read
    I understand you more
    Taken in every word you
    Have wrote a true poet
    writin as you do
    from the inner heart.....
    i like this always have......
    now give her her poem....much love :angel1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your imagery and passion are off the hook...Great!!
     
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    Really nice, especially the last line.

    Keep it going.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wrap indeed in this poem
    the dreamy romance
    that feeling of amor
    indeed brings on
    a delightful
    enlighten vibe
    with a shy smile
    truly
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this poem of love is awesome
    give it unto her humble soul
    tyte brutha
     
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    This was so captivating...

    (*hands to heart and eyes full of dreams*)....

    The structure of this piece
    the questions posed...
    everything about it...I adored!



    Once again...a masterpiece!
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..........

    Olakuoto.. Ty, now be good we don't want to burn up the site just yet.

    mzblkangel...... If I was your poem would you breath in my words? hhummm LOL, thank you angel.

    watzinaname.... thanks you just make me smile whenever I read one of your replys.


    PositiveMindset..... I try to live up to your name and keep it positive.

    Bluewater.......... now you do it like a pro also blue I always enjoy reading your scribes. thanks princess


    $$RICH$$ ... hey rich thanks man we will have to drop it together real soon.


    angelicsage....... thanks for bringing a lil joy to my page.
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I,m taking a cup of :coffee: here......
    :lol: .....
    taking my time to read.....



    You write beautifull poems i enjoy reading here...




    Love L...
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LibertyLady I share this cup of :coffee: with you and I say :thanks: for the words of kindness and I hope you do continue to :read: on! ;)
     
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