Black Poetry : your poem

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Aug 27, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey i am new at this so giving it a try.....
    this is your poem.....
    thinkin i am slippin not really knowing how to explain....
    your sweet gentle way drives me to the edge all the time....conquering my mind taken hold of my soul...i wont trade it for the world..the gift you have bestoy upon me i hope i can fullfill all that you wish in a woman...my dreams come strong my love is even stronger....i am not a super woman just a woman one that can give and share only as she knows how to....my deep inner thoughts you have found and the fears you have taken makin it easier for me to be me...taken my hand and placed me on a jounrey that i have never dare to take...i as a woman only can feel as you make me and let...for you have became my king in my eyes and my eyes alone...show me your way and i will follow....this is your poem.....
    searching for the right words hoping none of you is fake wanting and needing you to be real.....i was darken my hate and pain and you open my eyes to something brand new....my inner self i never took hold of i have much more to learn and i am willing to grow with you in learning who i am.....would you wait for me can you share with me my world as i share yours....trails and test stand in our way but in the end will we be in the shadows of the dust holding hands and stronger then when we first starting this jounery?
    my only question for you....:confused:
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome:wave:
    this is wonderful
    nice vibes
    nice flow
    yes please do
    share more
    Peace
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you

    :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to this new home u found
    welcome to the family of peace & love
    your scribe is tyte as i watch from flyte
    like how u vibe :toast:
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  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to destee! I like your piece and look forward to reading more from you. :toast:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME mzblkangel
    love the name :) ;)

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    this was tyte for real :) look forward to more
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    triniti424
    thanks.....it have alot of meanin for me...
    and thank you guys for being so nice and kind
     
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