Black Poetry : Your Night Is Falling (Haiku)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joyce, Oct 4, 2001.

  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your night is falling.
    Soon, it will be all over.
    Are you wasting time?




    Copyright © 2001 by Joyce Rogers
    From The “I Haiku You” Series
     
  2. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    spoken

    like the spiritual messenger you are.
    This one spoke loud and clear.
    thank you

    SWT
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, Joyce

    I hear you....

    "our lamps are half full
    as the spirit is removed
    we pray for more oil"

    amen

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyme wasted

    u r felt here in this one
    and i love the night air:)
     
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