Black Poetry : Your next.. its gunna get u too!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticManifesta, Apr 20, 2005.

  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got that block,
    cold and hard..
    my imagination burned and charred,
    hearts all scarred,

    They call it writers block,
    and Its plugged the hole in my brain,
    juices not flowing,
    im going insane,

    I see post after post,
    and my brain begins to roast,
    when i put pen to paper,
    my brain is tapered,

    If I put finger to key,
    the white screen is still all i see,
    Everyone in the darn world can write poetry but me,
    I see yall lil suckers,
    all full of glee.. typing away :geek:
    of the hardships of the day,
    even to my dismay,

    Ill get you!
    Ill be writing a again soon,
    and when that day comes,
    the block will be in your room,
    and ill sit back,

    rub whats left of my six pack,
    and laugh..
    cause somebody other than me,
    is going thru that misery.

    Tik' tock..
    Its gunna get you that darn block.
    :whip:
     
  2. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: Block

    Don't mention block. It is a mug when it happens. :dance:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That writer's block, it can and does happen to us all. This was a witty take on it poet, I enjoyed this write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this block comes and goes when u write through it
    i feel ya
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I put finger to key,
    the white screen is still all i see,
    Everyone in the darn world can write poetry but me,
    I see yall lil suckers,
    all full of glee.. typing away
    of the hardships of the day,
    even to my dismay,

    Ill get you!
    Ill be writing a again soon,
    and when that day comes,
    the block will be in your room,
    and ill sit back,

    rub whats left of my six pack,
    and laugh..
    cause somebody other than me,
    is going thru that misery.

    Tik' tock..
    Its gunna get you that darn block.



    ^^^^the dreaded writers block...for a peice about it,it was good....liked ya flow....stay droppin and writing,wven it it is nuthing to u....it'll soon come to be.....belee dat!
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My block just dont stop
    When I get it time to rock
    Dropping lyrics to make your car knock
    And you do stop heyyyyyyy
    And you do quit
    Poetic style that you just cant get with
    Write, write, write, write
    your vision is outta site
    Droping poems that we all can like.

    Thanks for sharing this piece was tyte.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    3 'O clock road block... it don't stop no show :picture:

    ps / I'm a true fan.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to the club...it gets us all, at times, but it, like everything else, passes.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm already there, sister. Very nicely put.
     
  10. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol.. yall are a mess, im still stuck.. :help: but hey.. im enjoying the site still. :bellydance:
     
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