Black Poetry : YOUR MY QUIET STORM

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see you. I feel you.
    Standing within my minds eye.
    Kissing me, :kiss: and causing things I like to feel.

    This happens every time I think of you.
    What is this other than love.
    Standing there in my mind poised in a pose
    that would stop my heart if I lingered long
    enough to ponder. I don't brush you out.

    I savor the minutes and time you come over me.
    I look forward to it. I hope no one comes into this
    time, when you have me captured. I think of you
    in the songs I hear. I taste your perfume in the
    air breezing thru my room.

    I long for that moment when you call or come
    over again. Pushing my sprit to heights
    unknown by many.

    I wouldn't try describing this in great detail, because
    these are my special times. I think about you.
    Essence unknown because you have been holding back.
    Not letting me have all of your splendor.
    I hope I please you as much as you do me.

    I don't doubt this.

    I just question it because I don't want to lose you.
    Quiet thoughts I will never tell.
    My friends see it in my face.
    They say I've changed.
    If they only knew.
    I hope I never return to the shell I was before you arrived.
    I don't want to rush this, but I love you. :luv:
    So if I seem anxious, it's only because I know the day
    ends and I will have to wait until tomorrow.
     
  2. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!! you definitely know how to take a
    sister there! That was beautiful!
    2 somebody's are very lucky right now!
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You .... blaquebutterfli-keeperofthedream
    I believe you are the keeper. Can I catch your dream I know you weave so well. You spin me and I float for awhile. Only the keeper can take me?

    I am the air.
    Swirling.
    Surrounding you with thoughts of distant places.
    Deep oceans, and things never thought before.
    Celestial places of the body.
    Of the sky.

    Look

    Did you see that star.
    It came from your smile.
    I swear.
    You have that about you.
    You are fire.
    Fanning my interest.
    Keeping me blowing around

    you

    because I can see
    I take you up,
    burning.
    Breast. Blood rushing.
    Punch drunk kind of love.
    Intense heat.
    Your love.
    Yet, intense
    not with a burn,
    but with passion,
    excitement
    and filled everyday,
    with new horizons
    new things.
    This I really like.

    My air becomes cool
    just enough so that
    You will have to increase your heat.
    Hoping I don't stop
    caressing over your body.
    No I won't stop.
    That would be foolish.
    Touch.
    Touch.
    Softly.
    There.
    Kiss your ear.
    Play with your hair.
    Looking
    all the time into your eyes.
    They close.
    So I join you.
    I can't afford
    to miss out on this dream.
    Your finesse,
    keeps me captured.
    Kiss.
     
  4. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am so moved by your words. They're so deep and honest. Please keep it flowing
     
  5. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You True Love.
    You share my love for freedom. If intensity was in my hands I would turn up the flame until I burned. With the commitment needed to hold love the way it should be held. If you want to share the exploration and depth of things not yet experienced and touched. Each time going deeper into the consuming passion. You have to take a chance. Jump in with both feet. Become swallowed up by the thing of your desire. Loving ever so deeply what you feel. To know you. Is to love. Count the levels. Bounce from one. Landing on another.
     
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    But my dear, you didn't know.
    It is in your hands
    So jump to the other level of commitment with me
    As we explore foundation on top of foundation
    Of pure bliss and sincere
    Adoration
    For what we call LOVE
    But define as peace
    Yes to know me is to LOVE me
    But are you ready to feel me
    If so I'm ready to shower you
    With floods of love in a storm no longer
    Quiet
    But intense
    And feel you
    With longing so strong
    You're froget about the storm
    Feel me
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My nature is tuned to your stroke.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Take me to paradise.
    I can achieve it.
    If you believe in me.
    Peace be still
    while I work the real.
    Unwinding some complexitys
    most men never get to share.

    Taking you there.
    I need you. take me
    away from what I don't need.
    I trust you.

    P.A.R.A.D.I.S.E

    Trust me.
    Recognize
    if you you belive it.
    A man
    can achieve it.
    I know that you
    are real.
    Not a fantasy to be taken for granted.
    I too am tired of being lonely.
    I gaurantee you
    the level you
    want is the one
    I want to give.

    Diamond mommy.
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diamonds
    Rubies
    Emeralds
    All of the above
    Show me bliss
    Show me happiness
    Show me True Love
    Protecting your trust
    Like a sacred treasure
    Never with holding anything from you
    I'm here for your total and complete pleasure
    Go ahead and 'work the real'
    Surpassing all boundaries
    Your heart is mine to hold
    And i'm so glad you found me.
    Is it destiny that has thrown us into
    Each other's waiting arms
    Or is it by chance that we've come together
    To form this unbreakable bond
    So yes take me there
    Take me with you
    All that you're waiting for and need is right here
    Let me give it to you
     
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    Oh my, HODEE..................

    My heart is a fine powder, melted...stolen with your words...

    Wow!.....................It was all so beautiful...

    I'm in a state of awe.......
     
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