Quiet Poetry Lounge : Your Loving Hand

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bruce, Jul 11, 2003.

  1. Bruce

    Bruce Active Member MEMBER

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    Guided by your loving hand
    She learns of life
    As she learns to understand

    She’s figuring out
    Where she alone is coming from
    Understanding her smile
    Learning what it really means to cry
    She grows as a woman
    Under your keen and watchful eye

    Watching her watching you
    Helping her go through
    Oh I’m so blessed
    My baby
    The fruit of my seed
    In such good hands
    Trusting hands
    Loving hands
    Your hands

    Her wonderful gifts
    Mixed so beautifully
    Making her the treasure she is
    I watch you together
    Amazed at the closeness
    The energy, wisdom, and beauty
    It is not meant for me to understand
    A fine woman she will be
    By the grace of God
    And your loving hand

    BE
    © 2003
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed this was off da hook
    brutha Bruce bring a fire of love
    to humble da heart
    tyte scribe poet.
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hands Down

    Beautiful, Bruce.
     
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    hey Bruce
    i am loving this flow
    it is beautiful :heart:
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a lovin classic here my brutha BRUCE
     
  6. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gone with your bad self Bruce! one love, get it!!!
     
  7. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautifull....


    and the peace in this poem.....



    aww..








    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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