Black Poetry : your love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Sep 18, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he made my skin scream
    (your love is bettah then lyfe itself)
    makin my heart skip1....
    2....
    3....
    beats till breathin came hard
    like i ran on pulsating concrete
    that held the worlds pain

    gasping.....
    behind (i)lids that
    wept xtasy,
    tears that begged
    for u to come.......

    -to be cont.

    sorry but the writers block is messin
    wit my head again! Don't worry as always
    i will finish it. Have i ever let yall down?

    much love,
    -story
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are deep
    and gentle
    you are the story :)
    Much love and Peace my little sistah
    :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks bluewater, u have supported me from the beggining and i look at u as a big sister, and i just wanted to say thanks for being there :grouphug:
    much love,
    -story
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    don't worry...this is beautiful even if it's not done. and you imagery is off the hook.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flow head on
    the block is only a myth
    dis was tyte i know u will
    bring it to a sweet end
     
  6. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall...im trin to get over it...i just can't seem to, but i'll try to do my thang...and come back on FIYAH:hot: like i said i WILL NOT leave yall hangin
     
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    you STILL doin ya thing gurlie!!!1 you styill tyte!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: :hot:

    oo yeah, hot so far, can't wait ta get some more. :D
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight so far..cant wait for the rest
     
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    it was still tight, story, madd love:love: :love:
     
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