Black Poetry : Your Love Hit My Spot

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  1. Abisha

    Abisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We met as children in church
    We were so young life could never hurt
    I liked you , you liked me we went out
    We were both 15 and love with a doubt
    I've been knowing you since I was 12
    But the preacher taught that sin would land us in hell
    Church memebers married us in thier mind
    Our life could change and we would leave each other behind
    You wanted to touch me and I accepted
    My heart pounded so hard I didn't think about heaven
    My parents were gone to work
    If I invite you in my house
    my hormones would arouse
    then I would not stop the hot spot that will flex from your part to my heart and therefore, I won't start
    As we satnd on my porch you must go before dark
    As we kissed our first kiss
    you made a neat twist
    as you grind me with your waist
    with all of your power I thought it was your fist
    I learned it was not as yoour hands held me tight
    the feeling was right
    we kissed in the night
    Still outside on the front lawn
    We rolled and felt so much fun
    Our freindship as kids
    has lasted for many years
    We always talked to each other over the phone
    I never knew you could make me moan and groan
    for passion deeper than the skies
    our love is so strong I could tell no lies
    We saw a sparkle in the sky
    I remebered the Lord and how he sits on High
    you were angered as I removed your hand from my thigh
    I said I was sorry but in hell I do not want to lift up my eye
    so by God's law will I abide
    But that night you dream that in me you would ride
    My thought were of God and when he thought of me, I wanted him to feel pride.
    Wait for me my love until we are of age
    if we are still together we can turn the page
    Get together as a family, set the stage
    plan for education , have some children... I will be worth your wait
    don't forget me my love, I know your love is hard and mine is wet
    but there are guidelines we must set...God is first we must never forget
    if we do it his way we won't regret....:love:
     
  2. BlaqButterfly

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    Oh, yeah. I'm feelin this one. I completly relate to this. If it's true it'll be worth the wait.
     
  3. Abisha

    Abisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    @BlaqButterFly

    This poem is true for me but it's about steamy hot romance for all the youngsters out there with flaired up hormones , I remeber what it was like to be 15 and wanted to be a word of encouragement for all the young ones with questions about love. Some who may browse through and need to hear that encouraging word... Wait on the Lord and be of good courage and he will stregnthn thine heart. Although I am grown but I have not forgotten what it was like to be in those shoes , I had the opportunity to be loose and thank God I did not do what my body wanted to do, but held out for God. God has been very good to me for holding out.
     
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    indeed the wait is worthy
    coz right now it's far 2 soon
    under the watchful eys
    from the man in da sky
    we want his blessing
    so wait for me ........

    some many so young give in to the heat of passion
    but true feelins and da love one vow will wait til da time come.
     
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    Abisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for your reply Amen RICH and you know he is the only one that matters,all else is second... he comes before we do ; meaning we must put our desire on the back burner because he know s what is best.:toast: Thanks for your reply!!
     
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    indeed we all been on the heated path at that young age in
    life truely GOD set forth our life's goal but so many teens get
    lost in the myth of friends who done it or tricking u into it
    i've seen both male & female get off into what they feel is love
    when it's a hit and run thing only to have their secret moment
    open at such age now the purity of one soul is no more
    GOD didn't plan it dis way ....now we need to teach & touch
    as many as we can, so many lost and the one's who know better
    yet don't know i always say have faith and he will comfort u
    in the heat of moment he will cool ya thrist from any sexual acts
    u have to believe in him as he do into u .....far too many 2 young
    2 soon 4 babies and sex stuff we have to learn theirs much tyme
    for dis i've known to see great friendship split coz of acts in
    heated moments when mom & dad not around
    I still say who have the rites of a vergin!!!!
     
  7. Abisha

    Abisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I totally agree and sex in itself to me is a spiritual thing and something occurs when the act is carried out. I don't know what happens exactly, but something happens that I don't understand and I am an adult that have been married for 12 years , and I still don't know exactly what happens in the act that makes the two that encountered the act together different. But after the act there is a change, for some reason it's a change that can't just be wiped away, what ever you had before becomes different some how. That is why it should happen between 2 consenting adults.
     
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    yes indeed ....it's not a game nor toy children should stay clear
    from the mask of mix motions even now some adults don't
    understand sex and what's sex coz true love is lovin not sex
    but we lose so many of our kids to the myth of sexuality....i agree
     
  9. Abisha

    Abisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel so bad for that child rapped up in the R.Kelly scene and just to look ...anyone would know that she was a well expereince sexually active child and that recorded experince was not her first. How sad it is for a child to experience the adult side of sex and how horrid for a grown up to enter a child's world... instead of real love children get real worn and looking so old an adult can not see the child in them any more, and some children are so messed up they can lie about their ages and get booze, get into clubs and get into grown up stuff like sexual acts and never really learn what love is and in some cases they beleive that sex is love. But I agree with you $$RICH$$ love is so much more complex and it's not just the sex.
     
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