Black Poetry : Your love for me is deeper than your physical needs

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by IntuitioninMD, Nov 7, 2004.

  1. IntuitioninMD

    IntuitioninMD Banned MEMBER

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    <hopefully this does not offend anyone :) >

    I accept our reality that we are not.. and ... most likely... will never be together... Fine.... that is very fine with me.

    I do know... that it was more than ***** that brought you by my house. I do know that it was more than ***** or a good blow job that had you calling and calling after months of not seeing each other....Hum... Me being a woman and knowing... how a woman can effect a man... I know that it was not just ***** that bought you by my house at night to stand in front of my house in the dark for 10 mins.

    I do wish however .. that you would have taken the chance and the risk and tried to express how you felt about me..... At some point and time you did love.. me.. or you at least decided to acknowledge within yourself... that I really LOVED you.... But I do know... you did not only come by... for the *****.

    You see... you passed ***** at the bus stops....
    You passed *****.. that last time you were in the stores.
    You passed up lots of ***** those countless times you went out and decided to... and then not to ....have sex with those women again.....
    I know that while you were on the way to see me... ***** was calling
    But.. something.. else brought you here......What... was it?

    By the way.. I love you too.
     
  2. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME...WELCOME...WELCOME...! ! ! ! ! !

    :hearthis: ...Hello there, I just want to
    WELCOME you to the Destee
    family, for it is here that
    you can walk in your poetic destiny
    and we hope that you make
    your self right at home, and by all
    means share more of your
    beautiful poems...!


    I really enjoyed this piece, it has
    a very strong vibe...I hope to hear
    more from you...
    "KEEP EM COMIN"...1​

    :welldone:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes things just have to be spelled out, I know it didn't offend me. Guess it's easier for some to say they love something physical, instead of admitting an emotional bond. I think this piece was clever. Welcome to Destee.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found
    welcome from above blessing u some love
    tyte drop well felt scribe u vibe here :welldone:
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    :hearthis: Do hope you stay and share a while and
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    http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=26882
    again welcome to the family :D
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Surely, I wasn't offended...done been down that road before. Maybe it's hard for him to admit that: you got that...come back ~snatch~
    And we welcome you with pleasure...I like the flow of this piece...very much, thanks for sharing the facts.
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a raw flow with words
    that stood together like
    shoulders unafraid to die
    for what they so desperately
    believe in...
    the power of the truth
    ...spoken


    Welcome poet!
    Make yourself at home...

    Peace, Love & Family
    Sage
     
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