Quiet Poetry Lounge : Your like a Ghost to me........

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nevar, Mar 7, 2009.

  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 19, 2005
    Messages:
    3,872
    Likes Received:
    134
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    working to own my plus size empire.....
    Location:
    I'm a Georgia Peach!!!!
    Ratings:
    +135
    Who is this faceless shadow that stands before me
    Who is this shadow that never takes form

    You swept me off my feet mesmerized my heart
    Drape my soul

    With you
    To be with you is all I desire

    You set my heart on fire
    As I couldn't keep up with the beats

    We was made for each other
    We wanted to live for each other

    But soon time has killed the love we use to feel
    Nothing real

    As I realized that me and you
    You and me
    Me and you

    Is no more making love
    Love not making
    Making love

    Not the hot, wet, str8 deep love
    But the emotion of love

    You hate to be around me
    I can't stand to be with you

    Our words are filled with fire
    My eyes burn with rage
    This stage

    Of separation is inevitable
    Can't call our love affair a box of chocolate

    Because it is no longer edible
    Edible
    No longer pleasurable

    Your no longer desiring to be at a home
    We are trying to make
    Our days

    are longer
    Nights are getting colder
    As I don't have you near my shoulder

    As I am accustomed to being with you
    I found you
    Just like you found me

    You say there is no distraction
    I say once again
    I feel some subtraction

    To on your side an addition
    I won't let you multiply

    Because this division
    Was not part of our equation
    Equation
    Equation

    1+1+=2

    1-0=1
    0-0=0

    You say this is hurting you more than it hurts me
    Me
    Me
    Me

    Wants us to both be happy
    Be loved
    and our
    Destiny fullfilled

    But how can we make it work if your just

    "A ghost to me"...........


    to be continued............






    Nevar112/lavette112
    copyright 2009​
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    one moment u see the next one u don't
    feeling linger emotions flow but yet
    inside is a void of a ghost of da past

    I enjoyed this do continue on
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    You have to wonder, how did we get to this awful place when it used to be like Eden. Well expressed poetess.
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 14, 2003
    Messages:
    6,642
    Likes Received:
    541
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Poet
    Location:
    The Lone-Star State
    Ratings:
    +606
    Just keepin it real

    BOO Boo,

    I see you love

    keeping it real

    Sistah mean...

    RIP beneath them sheets ghost :cook:
     
  5. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 19, 2005
    Messages:
    3,872
    Likes Received:
    134
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    working to own my plus size empire.....
    Location:
    I'm a Georgia Peach!!!!
    Ratings:
    +135
    thanks for the love given to me!
     
  6. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Canada
    Joined:
    Jan 28, 2001
    Messages:
    3,759
    Likes Received:
    673
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    the near north
    Ratings:
    +836
    there is a process to love...

    the discovery. the infusion. the explosion. the fading. in all things, there is a season. LET US NOT TRY TO PROLONG THE SEASON. when it's done...be done with it.

    beautifully written.
     
  7. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 28, 2009
    Messages:
    19,252
    Likes Received:
    5,505
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +5,560
    These two parts hit hard and low, my sistah!

    When you can't even fake the funk any more!
     
Loading...