Quiet Poetry Lounge : Your Hustling Side

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by choclatangel, Apr 20, 2006.

  1. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the blink of an eye my dream life is gone
    Can't see a white and yellow house or picket fence anymore
    Don't see me looking at our little brown children whom I'd adore
    You're asking me to give this up for a hypothetical scheme
    It could end in me burying you before I get my diamond ring
    To loose you for all eternity would be to loose myself and my king
    Even worse you could be knocked with a curse to do a 25 year bid
    What would I do then especially if I had you kids?
    This is a dangerous game you're playing and our lives are at risk
    Is it worth the instant gratification of a new crib and fancy whips?
    Are you willing to go back into that rat infested hole that the
    Government would like to call a rehabilitation center or state penitentiary?
    I feel like its till death do us part but I don't want
    To die young or be your widow at 21
    I love you so much because you are my true king
    You've opened up my eyes to new things, such as the beauty in me
    But I don't know if I can do for you what you are asking of me
    When you told me your decision last night, I cried myself to sleep
    Thinking this could truly be the end of you and me
    I don't have the heart to live as a drug dealer's wife
    But when we first me I told you I would ride or die
    And right now you've got me diein inside
    So for now it's time to say goodnight and goodbye...
    I'll always love you and you will still be a king in my eyes​
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  2. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ChocolateAngel.......

    ChocolateAngel......I feel you on this flow.........Sometimes the hustle-bustle life can drain the energy from the First Lady of a bigshot. All that glitters ain't gold. And all gold ain't good.

    Tyte drop poet.....:welldone: :spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    often what seem sweet ourside is sour inside , in the mist of what should be
    pose to what is , deep scribe i feel every bit of this .
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece poet, I admire your strength and courage...^5
    Always good to choose life over death
     
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