Black Poetry : Your House Must Fall

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Sep 5, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Intervals...

    Between power and greed
    Grow shorter everyday
    Nothing new is history
    Because nothing lasts today

    Enemies...

    No closer than friends
    War has seen to that
    Topsy-turvy government
    Spend lives hell-bent on death

    Citizens...

    Are suspect,
    Red scare coming back
    Bluecoat went confederate
    One world right one black

    Religion...

    That's sacrilege,
    Separate church and faith
    Bloodshed by murderers
    Unholy empire state

    Families...

    D-i-s-i-n-t-e-g-r-a-t-e
    Morals all but gone
    Fathers irresponsible
    This one hitting home ~


    Darryl Abdu Omari :crying:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u broke it all da way down !!!!!!
    this was one of the best scribe on bruthaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When families fall apart, so does the rest of the world, smh. This was on the money, poet. Flow on!!!!
     
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    Religion...

    That's sacrilege,
    Separate church and faith
    Bloodshed by murderers
    Unholy empire state


    You spoke volumes with this one brotha. Thank-you for the blessings and wisdom!!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow....this was deep...
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$, WATZ, NABRASKA. LOVELY, and FAMILY

    Much Love!!!
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you took this one and went with it spoke volumes likes the vibe..keep on bring it!!!!! i be reading...Angel
     
  8. angelicsage

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    yes...
    it def' is hitting home
    this was on point...
     
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    Yes, brother. I say, Preach it! This is the reality of this twisted place, where souls are lost and devils are man-made.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Word up! This one hit the truth lottery like a ton a bricks. Gwan, brutha and tell it.
     
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