Black Poetry : Your Gone

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Loveall20, Jul 21, 2003.

  1. Loveall20

    Loveall20 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Night befalls on me again,
    Still missing you........... when will I stop?
    See I lay here just pondering vivid memories,
    and the tears just... they just start
    I think of how we use to be in love,
    remember? so in love.
    And in your eyes I felt safe.......so secure....
    so much warmth.
    I remember how
    you'd make me laugh.....and I would struggle......
    to catch my breathe, How you held me beneath the stars and moon...
    like there beauty are love,........remember? we compared.
    And how you use to say you love me and how I felt....
    Overwhemed...
    because in these words without a doubt I knew I had found love,
    my best friend.
    But somewhere in time you went away.....
    and left me, you left me all alone.
    promises had no vaule
    because you were gone so far gone.
    Oh I loved you.......................but you died...yes the man I love has died,
    because though you lay here by myside,
    I'm missing you.....and I cry.
     
  2. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice, touchin flow... im sorry it has to be like this, but soon u'll feel better... god bless...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was well displayed keep flowin'
     
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    very nice flow
    much love to you :heart:
    Peace
     
  5. Loveall20

    Loveall20 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks so much for your comments.
     
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