Black Poetry : your flow eternal

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Mar 20, 2004.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for so long
    i flowed with your every move
    even when your every move didn't flow with me
    and then you went to the next level
    and i went to the next level
    and you hurt
    and i hurt
    and life goes on
    but my love for you
    will always be in my heart
    your smile
    even when you're being bad
    your laughter...even when you're holding in
    your conclusions
    your life story
    my life story
    reaching out through time
    and when i see you
    i want the sun to shine
    i want to sing old songs
    i want to play mick jagger
    and be me...around you
    and make wrong turns
    and laugh
    and watch you shake your head
    you are so beautiful to me
    you are free
    you are caught in bondage
    you are my favorite black man
    outside of my man
    i am protective of you
    to the death
    you have a piece of my soul
    and i am okay with that
    cause...you know
    i will always be there if you need me
    and i just hope that you will always be okay
    and that your smile goes on forever
    and that your laughter continues
    to ring
    in my heart
    every day
    eternal
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...redlady this was beautiful. Sounds like a love to me, whether it's a sisterly love, a love of friendship or what have you. The admiration here just flowed with each line.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as always you have posed so well
    loving this flow
    keep on scribing
    the beauty of this
    i feel the emotions of
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice...
     
  5. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    positive mindset - thank you...i just wrote was i was feeling at the moment.

    watzinaname - yes, that is my baby right there...i was just expressing it.

    mzblackangel - you always "get" my writing...thank you...i appreciate it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done u always bring it tyte
    this was sweet flowin
     
  7. Datpoeticfemme

    Datpoeticfemme Member MEMBER

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    This is too hott!!!
     
  8. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man diz was tyte

    love the way you put this one down Redlady
     
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