Black Poetry : Your Eyes Are Like....

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your eyes are like magic
    deeply contracted
    with embellished reactions
    that uncover our perfect interactions...

    you stare...
    I stop breathin’
    the air...
    i’m not receivin’
    your eyes make it revealin’
    I slowly glance to control this feelin’

    your eyes are like the stars
    amounting to evidence of love so far
    so richly burying loves cantar
    and reflecting the beauty of all art...

    its the way the light reflects
    off the beams of radiant specks
    I love the way your heart connects
    to see my life in all its tenderness

    your eyes see through my soul
    feel my spirit
    and loose control
    they read all my perfection’s
    while correcting my lowly directions...

    your eyes become lost in my soul
    we both have to contribute control
    let’s continue this way until we are forever old
    and loves gentle connection is
    evidently
    ever sweetly
    just repeatedly
    bold...
     
  2. kaly

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    Dayam those eyes

    I can feel you on this. My ex had eyes like that. Dayam I miss those eyes :heart:
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yep i know the feelin'...this poem is about my fiancee and his eyes are just like this......thanks for commenting...
     
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    tyte flow, poet!
    Very nice.
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot skrybe :)

    ~lovely~
     
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    This is really beautiful as all of your work, I can really feel this as well.
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwww ashanta...thanks that means alot to me :)
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful and remarkable as always Lovely those eyes indeed :) peace and blessins keep flowin
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the compliments serenti.... :)
     
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    Again...

    I love your style. Tyght Peice... crazy imagery.

    Reas
     
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