Black Poetry : Your eyes are beautiful

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ibrahim, Mar 8, 2010.

  1. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Ghana
    Joined:
    Sep 17, 2005
    Messages:
    1,047
    Likes Received:
    122
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Student
    Location:
    Ghana, West Africa
    Ratings:
    +122
    First poem i have written in months.

    Your eyes are beautiful.
    They look at me and i don't want to blink
    I look at your eyes and the illuminating panorama is amazing
    Looking at your eyes under the full moon i stare
    Shining light reaching far out in sight i glare
    I look at your eyes and i see beauty
    Your eyes are beautiful​
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 28, 2009
    Messages:
    19,252
    Likes Received:
    5,505
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +5,560
    Awww! Well, whoever she is, her eyes are reflecting the beauty of this poem!

    That's why luv'll do to ya! :)

    Very nicely done, Brother! :toast:
     
  3. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Ghana
    Joined:
    Sep 17, 2005
    Messages:
    1,047
    Likes Received:
    122
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Student
    Location:
    Ghana, West Africa
    Ratings:
    +122

    Thx sis.
    :SuN030:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    5his was so awesome anddevine ......great write bruh !!!
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 2, 2006
    Messages:
    1,915
    Likes Received:
    53
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +55
    Peace ibraham:
    Beauty is laced within
    every word of this write.
    Beautiful indeed!


    Much Luv & Peace,

    ~4EVER
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    Beautiful
     
  7. MS234

    MS234 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 1, 2010
    Messages:
    4,063
    Likes Received:
    3,380
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +3,901
    yes

    Ditto!
     
  8. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Ghana
    Joined:
    Sep 17, 2005
    Messages:
    1,047
    Likes Received:
    122
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Student
    Location:
    Ghana, West Africa
    Ratings:
    +122

    Thx.
     
  9. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Ghana
    Joined:
    Sep 17, 2005
    Messages:
    1,047
    Likes Received:
    122
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Student
    Location:
    Ghana, West Africa
    Ratings:
    +122

    Glad you liked it.


    Thx for reading.
     
Loading...