Black Poetry : Your DayDream

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You don’t know me...
    Even though I gave you my serenity
    And my childhood.
    Even when I poured the essence of tears into
    Your spirit
    Broke my heart, just to mend yours....

    You still do know me..
    It’s been years since I was a child
    And days since I turned into
    An adult.
    My smiles smiled suns and potential
    Daughter from your manhood
    The day came when I begged God just to
    Possess a piece of you for the
    Rest of my life..
    We both know that It would never work
    Even with the aide of prayer.

    I was called your daydream..
    The perfect woman while your eyes were closed
    You never knew what you possessed becuase
    You never opened your eyes

    You still don’t know me..
    My goals, my gains
    My silly *** nicknames..
    Thats all you know..
    If that is all then how
    The hell can we grow?
    [email protected]..and you don’t even know......

    The real me.
     
  2. angelicsage

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    Girl...

    It's been a minute...(too long)
    since you dropped some of
    this realness on us...Sis!

    Your writing is evolving...
    on the real...I was totally
    relating..."Got what he wants"
    right in front of him and too
    blind to see it...
    funny thing is ...by the time
    they acquire vision...it's
    usually to late...

    Allow me...cuz this was the :bomb:
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm

    telling you...this was the bomb
    I loved the way you let it floE..how you released the pain and let flow :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwww
    dis was awesome
    lovin it more more more !!!
     
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    tight drop

    love the flow
    deep thought
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Wow, the emotions here were just laid out raw, and I loved the way you posed it.
     
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    right...tru indeed...
    i be say'n this same dayum thing all da time...word
    tyte piece sis...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    somethings just stay the same..
    only broought out in different creative ways..
    like you just did...thanks
     
  9. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow thank you everyone for the compliments and I really missed being on the forum...But I had some of my own demons to work out...

    one love

    swtt
     
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    good lord, SwtT. sage is right that it's been a couplea minutes since you graced us with a piece. this is amazing! wow, wow, wow. and I'm feelin it a whole lot. I also hear ya about having to work out your demons. I'm doin a lil bit of that myself lately.

    much love, lil sis. hope you keep on flowin. :heart:
     
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